Analysis of Our Lady Peace

Mark Van Doren 1894 (Vermilion County) – 1972 (Torrington)



How far is it to peace, the piper sighed,
The solitary, sweating as he paused.
Asphalt the noon; the ravens, terrified,
Fled carrion thunder that percussion caused.

The envelope of earth was powder loud;
The taut wings shivered, driven at the sun.
The piper put his pipe away and bowed.
Not here, he said. I hunt the love-cool one,

The dancer with the clipped hair. Where is she?
We shook our heads, parting for him to pass.
Our lady was of no such trim degree,
And none of us had seen her face, alas.

She was the very ridges that we must scale,
Securing the rough top. And how she smiled
Was how our strength would issue. Not to fail
Was having her, gigantic, undefiled,

For homely goddess, big as the world that burned,
Grandmother and taskmistress, frild and town.
We let the stranger go; but when we turned
Our lady lived, fierce in each other's frown.


Scheme AXAX BCBC DEDE FXFA GHGH
Poetic Form Quatrain  (80%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Etheree  (20%)
Metre 1111110101 010010111 10101010 11001010101 010111101 0111010101 0101110101 1111110111 0101011111 11101101111 10101111101 0111110101 11010101111 0100110111 11101110111 11000101 11010110111 1001101 1101011111 10101101101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 845
Words 159
Sentences 14
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 133
Words per stanza (avg) 31
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on May 02, 2023

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Mark Van Doren

Mark Van Doren was an American poet, writer and a critic, apart from being a scholar and a professor of English at Columbia University for nearly 40 years, where he inspired a generation of influential writers and thinkers including Thomas Merton, Robert Lax, John Berryman, and Beat Generation writers such as Allen Ginsberg and Jack Kerouac. more…

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