Analysis of The Lovers Of Marchaid



Dominic came riding down, sworded, straight and splendid,
Drave his hilt against her door, flung a golden chain.
Said: 'I'll teach your lips a song sweet as his that's ended,
Ere the white rose call the bee, the almond flower again.'

But he only saw her head bent within the gloom
Over heaps of bridal thread bright as apple-bloom,
Silver silk like rain that spread across the driving loom.

Dreaming Fanch, the cobbler's son, took his tools and laces,
Wrought her shoes of scarlet dye, shoes as pale as snow;
'They shall lead her wildrose feet all the fairy paces
Danced along the road of love, the road such feet should go' -

But he only saw her eyes turning from his gift
Out towards the silver skies where the white clouds drift,
Where the wild gerfalcon flies, where the last sails lift.

Bran has built his homestead high where the hills may shield her,
Where the young bird waits the spring, where the dawns are fair,
Said: 'I'll name my trees for her, since I may not yield her
Stars of morning for her feet, of evening for her hair.'

But he did not see them ride, seven dim sail and more,
All along the harbor-side, white from shore to shore,
Nor heard the voices of the tide crying at her door.

Jean-Marie has touched his pipe down beside the river
When the young fox bends the fern, when the folds are still,
Said: 'I send her all the gifts that my love may give her, -
Golden notes like golden birds to seek her at my will.'

But he only found the waves, heard the sea-gull's cry,
In and out the ocean caves, underneath the sky,
All above the wind-washed graves where dead seamen lie.


Scheme AXAX BBB XCXC DDD EFEF GGG EHEH III
Poetic Form
Metre 100110111010 111010110101 1111101111110 10111010101001 111010110101 101110111101 1011111010101 1010101111010 101110111111 111011101010 1010111011111 111010110111 101010110111 1011110111 111111101110 101110110111 1111110111110 1110101110101 1111111101101 101010111111 1101010110101 1011111101010 101110110111 1110101111110 1011101110111 111010110111 00101010101 101011111101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,574
Words 302
Sentences 9
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 3, 4, 3, 4, 3, 4, 3
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 44
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 154
Words per stanza (avg) 37
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Marjorie Lowry Christie Pickthall

Marjorie Lowry Christie Pickthall, was a Canadian writer who was born in England but lived in Canada from the time she was seven. She was once "thought to be the best Canadian poet of her generation." more…

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