Analysis of His Shield

Marianne Moore 1887 (Kirkwood) – 1972 (New York City)



The pin-swin or spine-swine
(the edgehog miscalled hedgehog) with all his edges out,
echidna and echinoderm in distressed-
pin-cushion thorn-fur coats, the spiny pig or porcupine,
the rhino with horned snout–
everything is battle-dressed.

Pig-fur won’t do, I’ll wrap
myself in salamander-skin like Presbyter John.
A lizard in the midst of flames, a firebrand
that is life, asbestos-eyed asbestos-eared, with tattooed nap
and permanent pig on
the instep; he can withstand

fire and won’t drown. In his
unconquerable country of unpompous gusto,
gold was so common none considered it; greed
and flattery were unknown. Though rubies large as tennis-
balls conjoined in streams so
that the mountain seemed to bleed,

the inextinguishable
salamander styled himself but presbyter. His shield
was his humility. In Carpasian
linen coat, flanked by his household lion-cubs and sable
retinue, he revealed
a formula safer than

an armorer’s: the power of relinquishing
what one would keep; that is freedom. Become dinosaur-
skulled, quilled or salamander-wooled, more ironshod
and javelin-dressed than a hedgehog battalion of steel, but be
dull. Don’t be envied or
armed with a measuring rod.


Scheme ABCABC DEFDEF XGHXGH IJAIJX XKBXKX
Poetic Form Etheree  (20%)
Metre 011111 0111111101 01001001 1101110101110 01111 101101 111111 100101111 01000111010 111010101011011 010011 011101 1001101 110111 11110101011 01000011101110 11011 1010111 01 0101011111 11010001 1011111101010 10101 0100101 1101010100 111111100110 111010111 010011010101111 111101 1101001
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,170
Words 183
Sentences 10
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6, 6, 6
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 189
Words per stanza (avg) 36
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on May 02, 2023

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