Analysis of On the Hills

Lucy Maud Montgomery 1874 (New London, Prince Edward Island) – 1942 (Toronto)



Through the pungent hours of the afternoon,
On the autumn slopes we have lightly wandered
Where the sunshine lay in a golden swoon
And the lingering year all its sweetness squandered.
Oh, it was blithesome to roam at will
Over the crest of each westering hill,
Over those dreamy, enchanted lands
Where the trees held to us their friendly hands!

Winds in the pine boughs softly crooned,
Or in the grasses complained most sweetly,
With all the music of earth attuned
In this dear ripe time that must pass so fleetly:
Golden rod as we idled by
Held its torches of flame on high,
And the asters beckoned along our way
Like fair fine ladies in silk array.

We passed by woods where the day aside
Knelt like a pensive nun and tender,
We looked on valleys of purple pride
Where she reigned a queen in her misty splendor;
But out on the hills she was wild and free,
A comrade to wander right gipsily,
Luring us on over waste and wold
With the charm of a message half sung, half told,

And now, when far in the shining west
She has dropped her flowers on the sunset meadow,
We turn away from our witching quest
To the kindly starshine and gathering shadow;
Filled to the lips of our souls are we
With the beauty given so lavishly,
And hand in hand with the night we come
Back to the light and the hearth of home.


Scheme ABABCCDD BEXCFFGG HIHIECJJ KLKLEEXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1010101001 10101111010 101100101 001001111010 11111111 10011111 101100101 1011111101 10011101 1001001110 110101101 0111111111 10111101 11101111 00101001101 111100101 111110101 110101010 111101101 11101001010 1110111101 0111011 101110101 10110101111 011100101 1110101011 1101110101 1010101001 1101110111 1010101100 010110111 110100111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,299
Words 248
Sentences 5
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 8, 8, 8, 8
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 259
Words per stanza (avg) 62
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on April 13, 2023

1:14 min read
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Lucy Maud Montgomery

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