Analysis of To Sydney

Louise Mack 1870 (Hobart) – 1935



CITY, I never told you yet—   
 O little City, let me tell—   
A secret woven of your wiles,   
 Dear City with the angel face,   
 And you will hear with frowning grace,           
Or will you break in summer smiles?   

This is the secret, little town,   
 Lying so lightly towards the sea;   
City, my secret has no art,   
 Dear City with the golden door;           
 But oh, the whispers I would pour   
Into your ears—into your heart!   

You are my lover, little place,   
 Lying so sweetly all alone.   
And yet I cannot, cannot tell           
 My secret, for the voice will break   
 That tries to tell of all the ache   
Of this poor heart beneath your spell.   

Dreaming, I tell you all my tale;   
 Tell how the tides that wash your feet           
Sink through my heart and cut its cords.   
 Dreaming, I hold my arms, and drag   
 All, all into my heart—the flag   
On the low hill turned harbourwards,   

And all the curving little bays,           
 The hot, dust-ridden, narrow streets,   
The languid turquoise of the sky,   
 The gardens flowing to the wave,   
 I drag them in. O City, save   
The grave for me where I must lie.           

Yet humbly I would try to build   
 Stone upon stone for this town’s sake;   
Humbly would try for you to aid   
 Those whose wise love for you will rear   
 White monuments far off and near,           
White, but unsoiled, undesecrate.


Scheme ABCDDC XXEFFE DXBGGB XXXHHC XXIJJI XGXKKA
Poetic Form
Metre 10110111 11010111 01010111 11010101 01111101 11110101 11010101 101100101 10110111 11010101 11010111 01110111 11110101 10110101 01110101 11010111 11111101 11110111 10111111 11011111 11110111 10111101 11011101 101111 01010101 01110101 01010101 01010101 11101101 01111111 11011111 10111111 10111111 11111111 11001101 1111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,387
Words 234
Sentences 9
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6, 6, 6, 6
Lines Amount 36
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 156
Words per stanza (avg) 39
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Louise Mack

Marie Louise Hamilton Mack was an Australian poet, journalist and novelist. more…

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