Analysis of Friendship Broken



We chose the faint chill morning, friend and friend,
Pacing the twilight out beneath an oak,
Soul calling soul to judgement; and we spoke
Strange things and deep as any poet penned,
Such truth as never truth again can mend,
Whatever arts we win, what gods invoke;
It was not wrath, it made nor strife nor smoke:
Be what it may, it had a solemn end.
Farewell, in peace. We of the selfsame throne
Are foeman vassals; pale astrologers,
Each a wise sceptic of the other's star.
Silently, as we went our ways alone,
The steadfast sun, whom no poor prayer deters.
Drew high between us his majestic bar.

Mine was the mood that shows the dearest face
Thro' a long avenue, and voices kind
Idle, and indeterminate, and blind

As rumors from a very distant place;
Yet, even so, it gathered the first chase
Of the first swallows where the lane's inclined,
An ebb of wavy wings to serve my mind
For round Spring's vision. Ah, some equal grace
(The calm sense of seen beauty without sight)
Befell thee, honorable heart! no less
In patient stupor walking from the dawn;
Albeit thou too wert loser of life's light,
Like fallen Adam in the wilderness,
Aware of naught but of the thing withdrawn.


Scheme ABBAABBACDECDE FGG FFGGFHXIHXI
Poetic Form
Metre 1101110101 100110111 1101110011 1101110101 1111010111 101111101 1111111111 1111110101 10111011 111010100 101110101 10011110101 011111101 1101110101 1101110101 101100101 100010001 1101010101 1101110011 1011010101 1111011111 1111011101 0111110011 0111000111 0101010101 01011110111 1101000100 0111110101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,188
Words 217
Sentences 9
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 14, 3, 11
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 307
Words per stanza (avg) 71
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Louise Imogen Guiney

Louise Imogen Guiney was an American poet, essayist and editor born in Roxbury, Massachusetts. more…

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