Analysis of In Harness
Lola Ridge 1873 – 1941
The foreman's head slowly circling… White rims under yellow disks of eyes…. Gold hairs starting out of a blond scowl… Hovering… disappearing… recurring… the foreman's head.
Droning of power-machines… droning of girl with adenoids… Arms flapping with a fin-like motion under sun burning down through a sky-light like a glass lid. Light skating on the rims of wheels… boring in gimlet points. Needles flickering fierce white threads of light fine as a wasp's sting. Light in sweat-drops brighter than eyes and calico-pallid faces and bodies throwing off smells— and the air a bloated presence pressing on the walls and the silence a compressed scream.
Allons enfants de la patrie— Electric… piercing… shrill as a fife the voice of a little Russian breaks out of the shivered circle. Another voice rises… another and another leaps like flame to flame. And life—surging, clamorous, swarming like a rabble crazily fluttering ragged petticoats— comes rushing back into torpid eyes like suddenly yielded gates.
The girl with adenoids rocks on her hams. A torrent of song strains at her throat, gurgles, rushes, gouges her blocked pipes. Her feet beat a wild tattoo— head flung back and pelvis lifting to the white body of the sun. Mates now, these two— goddess and god…. Marchons!
Only the power machines drone with metallic docility under the flaxen head of the foreman poised like an amazed gull.
To-day
little French merchant men
with pointed beards
and fat American merchant men
without any beards
drive to a feast of buttered squabs.
The band… accoutered and neatly caparisoned…
plays the Marseillaise….
And I think of a wild stallion… newly caught…
flanks yet taut and nostrils spread
to the smell of a racing mare,
hitched to a grocer's cart.
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 01110100111010111111011011100010010011 101100110111101101011101011011011101111010111100111010011111110111011101101010100101011001010101010100100011 111110001010110101101010111010100101100100010111110110110101010010010101101011011100101 011101101010111101110101101101011110101010110101111110011 1001001110100100100111010111011 11 101101 1101 010100101 01101 11011101 0110101 101 01110110101 1110101 10110101 110101 |
Characters | 1,812 |
Words | 291 |
Sentences | 19 |
Stanzas | 6 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 12 |
Lines Amount | 17 |
Letters per line (avg) | 82 |
Words per line (avg) | 17 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 233 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 48 |
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Submitted on May 13, 2011
Modified on March 05, 2023
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