Analysis of My Fancy

Lewis Carroll 1832 (Daresbury) – 1898 (Guildford)



I painted her a gushing thing,
With years about a score;
I little thought to find they were
A least a dozen more;
My fancy gave her eyes of blue,
A curly auburn head:
I came to find the blue a green,
The auburn turned to red.

She boxed my ears this morning,
They tingled very much;
I own that I could wish her
A somewhat lighter touch;
And if you ask me how
Her charms might be improved,
I would not have them added to,
But just a few removed!

She has the bear's ethereal grace,
The bland hyaena's laugh,
The footstep of the elephant,
The neck of a giraffe;
I love her still, believe me,
Though my heart its passion hides;
"She's all my fancy painted her,"
But oh! how much besides!


Scheme ABCBDEXE AFCFXGDG XHXHXICI
Poetic Form
Metre 11000101 110101 11011110 010101 11010111 010101 11110101 010111 1111110 11101 1111110 011101 011111 011101 11111101 110101 110101001 0111 0110100 011001 1101011 1111101 11110100 111101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 667
Words 137
Sentences 5
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 8, 8, 8
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 174
Words per stanza (avg) 45
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on April 28, 2023

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Lewis Carroll

Charles Lutwidge Dodgson, better known by his pen name, Lewis Carroll, was an English writer, mathematician, logician, Anglican deacon and photographer. more…

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