Analysis of The Anxious Dead

John McCrae 1872 (Guelph) – 1918 (Boulogne-sur-Mer)



O guns, fall silent till the dead men hear
 Above their heads the legions pressing on:
(These fought their fight in time of bitter fear,
 And died not knowing how the day had gone.)

O flashing muzzles, pause, and let them see
 The coming dawn that streaks the sky afar;
Then let your mighty chorus witness be
 To them, and Caesar, that we still make war.

Tell them, O guns, that we have heard their call,
 That we have sworn, and will not turn aside,
That we will onward till we win or fall,
 That we will keep the faith for which they died.

Bid them be patient, and some day, anon,
 They shall feel earth enwrapt in silence deep;
Shall greet, in wonderment, the quiet dawn,
 And in content may turn them to their sleep.


Scheme XAXB CXCX DEDE AFBF
Poetic Form Quatrain  (50%)
Metre 1111010111 0111010101 1111011101 0111010111 1101010111 0101110101 1111010101 1101011111 1111111111 1111011101 1111011111 1111011111 111100111 111110101 1101000101 0010111111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 713
Words 139
Sentences 5
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 138
Words per stanza (avg) 34
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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John McCrae

Lieutenant Colonel John Alexander McCrae, MD was a Canadian poet, physician, author, artist and soldier during World War I, and a surgeon during the Second Battle of Ypres, in Belgium. more…

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