Analysis of Two Travellers in the Place Vendome

Amy Lowell 1874 (Brookline) – 1925 (Brookline)



Reign of Louis Philippe

A great tall column spearing at the sky
With a little man on top. Goodness! Tell me why?
He looks a silly thing enough to stand up there so high.

What a strange fellow, like a soldier in a play,
Tight-fitting coat with the tails cut away,
High-crowned hat which the brims overlay.

Two-horned hat makes an outline like a bow.
Must have a sword, I can see the light glow
Between a dark line and his leg. Vertigo

I get gazing up at him, a pygmy flashed with sun.
A weathercock or scarecrow or both things in one?
As bright as a jewelled crown hung above a throne.

Say, what is the use of him if he doesn't turn?
Just put up to glitter there, like a torch to burn,
A sort of sacrificial show in a lofty urn?

But why a little soldier in an obsolete dress?
I'd rather see a Goddess with a spear, I confess.
Something allegorical and fine. Why, yes -

I cannot take my eyes from him. I don't know why at all.
I've looked so long the whole thing swims. I feel he ought to fall.
Foreshortened there among the clouds he's pitifully small.

What do you say? There used to be an Emperor standing there,
With flowing robes and laurel crown. Really? Yet I declare
Those spiral battles round the shaft don't seem just his affair.

A togaed, laurelled man's I mean. Now this chap seems to feel
As though he owned those soldiers. Whew! How he makes one reel,
Swinging round above his circling armies in a wheel.

Sweeping round the sky in an orbit like the sun's,
Flashing sparks like cannon-balls from his own long guns.
Perhaps my sight is tired, but that figure simply stuns.

How low the houses seem, and all the people are mere flies.
That fellow pokes his hat up till it scratches on the skies.
Impudent! Audacious! But, by Jove, he blinds the eyes!


Scheme A BBB AAA XCC DDX EEE FFF GGG HHH III JJJ KKK
Poetic Form
Metre 1110010 0111010101 101011110111 11010101111111 101101010001 1101101101 11110110 111111101 1101111011 0101101110 1110111010111 0111011101 11101110101 111011111101 111110110111 011010100101 110101001101 1101010101101 1001000111 11011111111111 11110111111111 110101110001 111111111100101 11010101101101 11010101111101 011111111111 1111110111111 10101110010001 101010110101 101110111111 01111101110101 11010101010111 11011111110101 10101111101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,732
Words 335
Sentences 36
Stanzas 12
Stanza Lengths 1, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3
Lines Amount 34
Letters per line (avg) 40
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 113
Words per stanza (avg) 28
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Amy Lowell

Amy Lawrence Lowell was an American poet of the imagist school from Brookline, Massachusetts who posthumously won the Pulitzer Prize for Poetry in 1926. more…

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