Analysis of Sweet William's Farewell to Black-ey'd Susan: A Ballad

John Gay 1685 – 1732



1       All in the Downs the fleet was moor'd,
2         The streamers waving in the wind,
3     When black-ey'd Susan came aboard.
4         Oh! where shall I my true love find!
5     Tell me, ye jovial sailors, tell me true,
6     If my sweet William sails among the crew.

7       William, who high upon the yard,
8         Rock'd with the billow to and fro,
9     Soon as her well-known voice he heard,
10       He sigh'd, and cast his eyes below:
11   The cord slides swiftly through his glowing hands,
12   And, (quick as lightning) on the deck he stands.

13     So the sweet lark, high pois'd in air,
14       Shuts close his pinions to his breast,
15   (If, chance, his mate's shrill call he hear)
16       And drops at once into her nest.
17   The noblest captain in the British fleet,
18   Might envy William's lip those kisses sweet.

19     'O Susan, Susan, lovely dear,
20       My vows shall ever true remain;
21   Let me kiss off that falling tear,
22       We only part to meet again.
23   Change, as ye list, ye winds; my heart shall be
24   The faithful compass that still points to thee.

25     'Believe not what the landmen say,
26       Who tempt with doubts thy constant mind:
27   They'll tell thee, sailors, when away,
28       In ev'ry port a mistress find.
29   Yes, yes, believe them when they tell thee so,
30   For thou art present wheresoe'er I go.

31     'If to far India's coast we sail,
32       Thy eyes are seen in di'monds bright,
33   Thy breath is Afric's spicy gale,
34       Thy skin is ivory, so white.
35   Thus ev'ry beauteous object that I view,
36   Wakes in my soul some charm of lovely Sue.

37     'Though battle call me from thy arms
38       Let not my pretty Susan mourn;
39   Though cannons roar, yet safe from harms,
40       William shall to his dear return.
41   Love turns aside the balls that round me fly,
42   Lest precious tears should drop from Susan's eye'.

43     The boatswain gave the dreadful word,
44       The sails their swelling bosom spread,
45   No longer must she stay aboard:
46       They kiss'd, she sigh'd, he hung his head.
47   Her less'ning boat, unwilling rows to land:
48   'Adieu', she cries! and wav'd her lily hand.


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Poetic Form
Metre 10010111 01010001 11110101 11111111 11110010111 1111010101 10110101 11010101 11011111 11011101 0111011101 0111010111 10111101 1111111 11111111 01110101 0101000101 1101011101 11010101 11110101 11111101 11011101 1111111111 0101011111 0111011 11111101 11110101 0110101 1101111111 11110111 111100111 11110111 1111101 11110011 11110111 1011111101 11011111 11110101 11011111 10111101 1101011111 1101111101 01010101 01110101 11011101 11111111 0111010111 0111010101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 2,158
Words 390
Sentences 19
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6, 6, 6, 6, 6, 6
Lines Amount 48
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 12
Letters per stanza (avg) 189
Words per stanza (avg) 73
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on April 16, 2023

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John Gay

John Gay, a cousin of the poet John Gay, was an English philosopher, biblical scholar and Church of England clergyman. more…

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