Analysis of The Equilibrists



Full of her long white arms and milky skin
He had a thousand times remembered sin.
Alone in the press of people traveled he,
Minding her jacinth, and myrrh, and ivory.

Mouth he remembered: the quaint orifice
From which came heat that flamed upon the kiss,
Till cold words came down spiral from the head.
Grey doves from the officious tower illsped.

Body: it was a white field ready for love,
On her body's field, with the gaunt tower above,
The lilies grew, beseeching him to take,
If he would pluck and wear them, bruise and break.

Eyes talking: Never mind the cruel words,
Embrace my flowers, but not embrace the swords.
But what they said, the doves came straightway flying
And unsaid: Honor, Honor, they came crying.

Importunate her doves. Too pure, too wise,
Clambering on his shoulder, saying, Arise,
Leave me now, and never let us meet,
Eternal distance now command thy feet.

Predicament indeed, which thus discovers
Honor among thieves, Honor between lovers.
O such a little word is Honor, they feel!
But the grey word is between them cold as steel.

At length I saw these lovers fully were come
Into their torture of equilibrium;
Dreadfully had forsworn each other, and yet
They were bound each to each, and they did not forget.

And rigid as two painful stars, and twirled
About the clustered night their prison world,
They burned with fierce love always to come near,
But honor beat them back and kept them clear
.
Ah, the strict lovers, they are ruined now!
I cried in anger. But with puddled brow
Devising for those gibbeted and brave
Came I descanting: Man, what would you have?

For spin your period out, and draw your breath,
A kinder saeculum begins with Death.
Would you ascend to Heaven and bodiless dwell?
Or take your bodies honorless to Hell ?

In Heaven you have heard no marriage is,
No white flesh tinder to your lecheries,
Your male and female tissue sweetly shaped
Sublimed away, and furious blood escaped.

Great lovers lie in Hell, the stubborn ones
Infatuate of the flesh upon the bones;
Stuprate, they rend each other when they kiss,
The pieces kiss again, no end to this.

But still I watched them spinning, orbited nice.
Their flames were not more radiant than their ice.
I dug in the quiet earth and wrought the tomb
And made these lines to memorize their doom:—

Equilibrists lie here; stranger, tread light;
Close, but untouching in each other's sight;
Mouldered the lips arid ashy the tall skull.
Let them lie perilous and beautiful.


Scheme AABB CDEE FFGG XXHH IIJJ KKLL MMNN OOPP QQXX RRSS XCTT XXDD UUVV WWXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1101110101 1101010101 01001110101 10010010100 1101001100 1111110101 1111110101 11101101 10110111011 101011011001 0101010111 1111011101 1101010101 01110110101 1111011110 00110101110 1011111 111101001 111010111 0101010111 01000111010 10011100110 11010111011 10111011111 11111101001 0111010100 1001111001 101111011101 0101110101 0101011101 111111111 1101110111 1 1011011101 110101111 01011101 11111111 11110010111 01010111 1101110011 11110111 0101111101 11110111 11011101 1010100101 1101010101 0101010101 111110111 0101011111 11111101001 11011100111 11001010101 011111011 1111011 11101101 1011010011 1111000100
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 2,481
Words 435
Sentences 27
Stanzas 13
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 9, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 57
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 150
Words per stanza (avg) 33
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on April 26, 2023

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John Crowe Ransom

John Crowe Ransom was an educator, scholar, literary critic, poet, essayist and editor. more…

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