Analysis of Song #3
John Clare 1793 (Helpston) – 1864 (St Andrew's Hospital)
I peeled bits of straws and I got switches too
From the grey peeling willow as idlers do,
And I switched at the flies as I sat all alone
Till my flesh, blood, and marrow was turned to dry bone.
My illness was love, though I knew not the smart,
But the beauty of love was the blood of my heart.
Crowded places, I shunned them as noises too rude
And fled to the silence of sweet solitude.
Where the flower in green darkness buds, blossoms, and fades,
Unseen of all shepherds and flower-loving maids--
The hermit bees find them but once and away.
There I'll bury alive and in silence decay.
I looked on the eyes of fair woman too long,
Till silence and shame stole the use of my tongue:
When I tried to speak to her I'd nothing to say,
So I turned myself round and she wandered away.
When she got too far off, why, I'd something to tell,
So I sent sighs behind her and walked to my cell.
Willow switches I broke and peeled bits of straws,
Ever lonely in crowds, in Nature's own laws--
My ball room the pasture, my music the bees,
My drink was the fountain, my church the tall trees.
Who ever would love or be tied to a wife
When it makes a man mad all the days of his life?
Scheme | AABBCCDDEEFF XXFFGGHHIIJJ |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11111011101 101101111 011101111101 111101011111 11011111101 101011101111 101011111011 0110101110 1010011011001 011110010101 01011111001 111001001001 11101111011 11001101111 111111011011 11111011001 111111111011 111101001111 1101101111 10100101011 11101011001 11101011011 11011111101 111011101111 |
Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
Characters | 1,155 |
Words | 234 |
Sentences | 10 |
Stanzas | 2 |
Stanza Lengths | 12, 12 |
Lines Amount | 24 |
Letters per line (avg) | 38 |
Words per line (avg) | 10 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 451 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 116 |
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Submitted on May 13, 2011
Modified on March 05, 2023
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