Analysis of Song #3

John Clare 1793 (Helpston) – 1864 (St Andrew's Hospital)



I peeled bits of straws and I got switches too
From the grey peeling willow as idlers do,
And I switched at the flies as I sat all alone
Till my flesh, blood, and marrow was turned to dry bone.
My illness was love, though I knew not the smart,
But the beauty of love was the blood of my heart.
Crowded places, I shunned them as noises too rude
And fled to the silence of sweet solitude.
Where the flower in green darkness buds, blossoms, and fades,
Unseen of all shepherds and flower-loving maids--
The hermit bees find them but once and away.
There I'll bury alive and in silence decay.

I looked on the eyes of fair woman too long,
Till silence and shame stole the use of my tongue:
When I tried to speak to her I'd nothing to say,
So I turned myself round and she wandered away.
When she got too far off, why, I'd something to tell,
So I sent sighs behind her and walked to my cell.
Willow switches I broke and peeled bits of straws,
Ever lonely in crowds, in Nature's own laws--
My ball room the pasture, my music the bees,
My drink was the fountain, my church the tall trees.
Who ever would love or be tied to a wife
When it makes a man mad all the days of his life?


Scheme AABBCCDDEEFF XXFFGGHHIIJJ
Poetic Form
Metre 11111011101 101101111 011101111101 111101011111 11011111101 101011101111 101011111011 0110101110 1010011011001 011110010101 01011111001 111001001001 11101111011 11001101111 111111011011 11111011001 111111111011 111101001111 1101101111 10100101011 11101011001 11101011011 11011111101 111011101111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,155
Words 234
Sentences 10
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 12, 12
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 38
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 451
Words per stanza (avg) 116
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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John Clare

John Clare was an English poet in his time he was commonly known as the Northamptonshire Peasant Poet more…

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