Analysis of Free Fantasia On Japanese Themes

Amy Lowell 1874 (Brookline) – 1925 (Brookline)



All the afternoon there has been a chirping of birds,
And the sun lies warm and still on the western sides of swollen branches.
There is no wind;
Even the little twigs at the ends of the branches do not move,
And the needles of the pines are solid
Bands of inarticulated blackness
Against the blue-white sky.

Still, but alert;
And my heart is still and alert,
Passive with sunshine,
Avid of adventure.

I would experience new emotions,
Submit to strange enchantments,
Bend to influences
Bizarre, exotic,
Fresh with burgeoning.

I would climb a sacred mountain,
Struggle with other pilgrims up a steep path through pine-trees,
Above to the smooth, treeless slopes,
And prostrate myself before a painted shrine,
Beating my hands upon the hot earth,
Quieting my eyes upon the distant sparkle
Of the faint spring sea.

I would recline upon a balcony
In purple curving folds of silk,
And my dress should be silvered with a pattern
Of butterflies and swallows,
And the black band of my obi
Should flash with gold circular threads,
And glitter when I moved.
I would lean against the railing
While you sang to me of wars
Past and to come—
Sang, and played the samisen.

Perhaps I would beat a little hand drum
In time to your singing;
Perhaps I would only watch the play of light
Upon the hilt of your two swords.

I would sit in a covered boat,
Rocking slowly to the narrow waves of a river,
While above us, an arc of moving lanterns,
Curved a bridge,
A hiss of gold
Blooming out of darkness,
Rockets exploded,
And died in a soft dripping of colored stars.
We would float between the high trestles,
And drift away from other boats,
Until the rockets flared soundless,
And their falling stars hung silent in the sky,
Like wistaria clusters above the ancient entrance of a temple.

I would anything
Rather than this cold paper;
With outside, the quiet son on the sides of burgeoning branches,
And inside, only my books.


Scheme ABXXCDE FFGH XAXXI XXXGXJK KXXXXXXIXLG LIXX XHXXXDCXAXAEJ IHBX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (27%)
Metre 100111101011 00111011010111010 1111 1001011011010111 0010101110 11110 010111 1101 01111001 1011 101010 1101001010 01111 11100 01010 11100 11101010 10110101011111 01101101 0101010101 101101011 100110101010 10111 1101010100 01010111 0111111010 110010 0011111 11111001 010111 11101010 1111111 1011 10101 0111101011 011110 01111010111 01011111 11100101 1010101011010 10111111010 101 0111 101110 10010 01001101101 11101011 01011101 0101011 01101110001 111001010101010 1110 1011110 1110101101110010 0011011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,860
Words 341
Sentences 12
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 7, 4, 5, 7, 11, 4, 13, 4
Lines Amount 55
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 189
Words per stanza (avg) 42
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 12, 2023

1:42 min read
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Amy Lowell

Amy Lawrence Lowell was an American poet of the imagist school from Brookline, Massachusetts who posthumously won the Pulitzer Prize for Poetry in 1926. more…

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