Analysis of Preamble (A Rough Draft For An Ars Poetica)

Jean Cocteau 1889 (Maisons-Laffitte) – 1963 (Milly-la-Forêt)



A rough draft
for an ars poetica

Let's get our dreams unstuck

The grain of rye
free from the prattle of grass
et loin de arbres orateurs

It     will sprout

But forget about
the rustic festivities

For the explosive word
falls harmlessly
eternal through
the compact generations

and except for you

nothing
                 denotates

its sweet-scented dynamite

Greetings
I discard eloquence
the empty sail
and the swollen sail
which cause the ship
to lose her course

My ink nicks
and there

and
there

sleeps
deep poetry

The mirror-paneled wardrobe
washing down ice-floes
the little eskimo girl

dreaming
in a heap
of moist negroes
her nose was
            flattened
against the window-pane
of dreary Christmases

A white bear
adorned with chromatic moire

dries himself in the midnight sun

The huge luxury item

Slowly founders
all its lights aglow

and so
sinks the evening-dress ball
into the thousand mirrors
of the palace hotel

And now
it is I

the thin Columbus of phenomena
alone
in the front
of a mirror-paneled wardrobe
full of linen
and locking with a key

The obstinate miner
of the void
exploits
his fertile mine

the potential in the rough
glitters        there
mingling with its white rock

Oh
    princess of the mad sleep
listen to my horn
         and my pack of hounds

I deliver you
from the forest
where we came upon the spell

Here we are
by the pen
one with the other
wedded
on the page

Isles          sobs of Ariadne

Ariadnes
        dragging   along
     Aridnes          seals

for I betray you my fair stanzas
to
run and awaken
elsewhere

I plan no architecture

Simply
deaf
like you       Beethoven

blind
like you
Homer
numberless old man

I elaborate
in the prairies of inner
silence

and the work of the mission
and the poem of the work
and the stanza of the poem
and the group of the stanza
and the words of the group
and the letters of the word
and        the least
loop of the letters

it's your foot
of attentive satin
that I place in position
pink
tightrope walker
sucked up by the void

to the left         to the right
the god gives a shake
and I walk
towards the other side
       with infinite precaution

Submitted by Linda M. Gibbs


Scheme XA A BCC D DX EFGX G AC H XIJJXX XK LK XF MCX ANXXLXX KG O P QR RXQS XB TXXMOA UVXX XKA RNXX GXS XXUXX F CAX XGOK U FXO XGUX XUI OAPTXEXQ XOOAUV HAAXO X
Poetic Form Tetractys  (43%)
Metre 011 1111 1110101 0111 1101011 11111 111 10101 0100100 100101 1100 0101 010010 00111 10 1 111010 10 101100 0101 00101 1101 1101 111 01 0 1 1 1100 010101 10111 010101 10 001 1110 011 10 010101 110100 011 01111 1010011 0110010 1010 11101 01 101011 0101010 101001 01 111 0101010100 01 001 1010101 1110 010101 010010 101 1 1101 0010001 101 1001111 1 101011 10111 01111 10101 1010 1110101 111 101 11010 10 101 111010 1 1001 11 110111110 1 10010 1 111100 10 1 11100 1 11 10 111 1010 0010110 10 0011010 0010101 00101010 0011010 001101 0010101 001 11010 111 101010 1110010 1 110 11101 101101 01101 011 010101 1100010 01011011
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 2,172
Words 384
Sentences 9
Stanzas 38
Stanza Lengths 2, 1, 3, 1, 2, 4, 1, 2, 1, 6, 2, 2, 2, 3, 7, 2, 1, 1, 2, 4, 2, 6, 4, 3, 4, 3, 5, 1, 3, 4, 1, 3, 4, 3, 8, 6, 5, 1
Lines Amount 115
Letters per line (avg) 14
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 44
Words per stanza (avg) 11
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on April 13, 2023

1:55 min read
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Jean Cocteau

Jean Maurice Eugène Clément Cocteau was a French poet, novelist, dramatist, designer, playwright, artist and filmmaker. more…

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