Analysis of Fidelis

Adelaide Anne Procter 1825 (Bedford Square) – 1864



You have taken back the promise
That you spoke so long ago;
Taken back the heart you gave me-
I must even let it go.
Where Love once has breathed, Pride dieth,
So I struggled, but in vain,
First to keep the links together,
Then to piece the broken chain.

But it might not be-so freely
All your friendship I restore,
And the heart that I had taken
As my own forevermore.
No shade of reproach shall touch you,
Dread no more a claim from me-
But I will not have you fancy
That I count myself as free.

I am bound by the old promise;
What can break that golden chain?
Not even the words that you have spoken,
Or the sharpness of my pain:
Do you think, because you fail me
And draw back your hand today,
That from out the heart I gave you
My strong love can fade away?

It will live. No eyes may see it;
In my soul it will lie deep,
Hidden from all; but I shall feel it
Often stirring in its sleep.
So remember that the friendship
Which you now think poor and vain,
Will endure in hope and patience,
Till you ask for it again.

Perhaps in some long twilight hour,
Like those we have known of old,
When past shadows gather round you,
And your present friends grow cold,
You may stretch your hands out towards me-
Ahl You will-I know not when-
I shall nurse my love and keep it
Faithfully, for you, till then.


Scheme ABCBXDED CXFEGCCC ADFDCHGH IJIJXDXK ELGLCKIK
Poetic Form Etheree  (28%)
Metre 11101010 1111101 10101111 1110111 1111111 1110101 11101010 1110101 11111110 1110101 00111110 1111 11101111 1110111 11111110 111111 11110110 1111101 1100111110 1010111 11101111 0111101 11101111 1111101 11111111 0111111 101111111 1010011 10101010 1111101 10101010 1111101 01011110 1111111 1111011 0110111 111111011 1111111 11111011 1001111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,268
Words 259
Sentences 11
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 8, 8, 8, 8, 8
Lines Amount 40
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 201
Words per stanza (avg) 51
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 06, 2023

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Adelaide Anne Procter

Adelaide Anne Procter was an English poet and philanthropist. more…

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