Analysis of Unshriven



Oh ! the sun rose on the lea, and the bird sang merrilie,
And the steed stood ready harness'd in the hall.
And he left his lady's bower, and he sought the eastern tower,
And he lifted cloak and weapon from the wall.

'We were wed but yester-noon, must we separate so soon,
Must you travel unassoiled and, aye, unshriven,
With the blood stain on your hand, and the red streak on your brand,
And your guilt all unconfess'd and unforgiven ?'

'Tho' it were but yester-even we were wedded, still unshriven,
Across the moor this morning I must ride ;
I must gallop fast and straight, for my errand will not wait ;
Fear naught, I shall return at eventide.'

'If I fear, it is for thee, thy weal is dear to me,
Yon moor with retribution seemeth rife ;
As we've sown so must we reap, and I've started in my sleep
At the voice of the avenger, 'Life for life.' '

'My arm is strong, I ween, and my trusty blade is keen,
And the courser that I ride is swift and sure,
And I cannot break my oath, though to leave thee I am loath,
There is one that I must meet upon the moor.'

Oh ! the sun shone on the lea, and the bird sang merrilie,
Down the avenue and through the iron gate,
Spurr'd and belted, so he rode, steel to draw and steel to goad,
And across the moor he gallop'd fast and straight.

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Oh ! the sun shone on the lea, and the bird sang full of glee,
Ere the mists of evening gather'd chill and grey ;
But the wild bird's merry note on the deaf ear never smote,
And the sunshine never warmed the lifeless clay.

Ere the sun began to droop, or the mist began to stoop,
The youthful bride lay swooning in the hall ;
Empty saddle on his back, broken bridle hanging slack,
The steed returned full gallop to the stall.

Oh ! the sun sank in the sea, and the wind wailed drearilie ;
Let the bells in yonder monastery toll,
For the night rack nestles dark round the body stiff and stark,
And unshriven to its Maker flies the soul.


Scheme AAXA BBCX BXDC XEXE XFXF ADXD AXCA XAXA AAXA
Poetic Form
Metre 101110100111 00111010001 0111101001101010 01101010101 101111111011 11101011 10111110011111 011110010 1101110101011 0101110111 11101011110111 11110111 1111111111111 11101011 11111110110011 10110010111 1111110110111 00101111101 01101111111111 11111110101 101110100111 1010010101 10101111110111 00101110101 1 1 10111010011111 10111010101 10111011011101 0011010101 10101111010111 0101110001 10101111010101 0101110101 101100100111 1010101001 10111011010101 011110101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,969
Words 371
Sentences 36
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 2, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 38
Letters per line (avg) 38
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 145
Words per stanza (avg) 41
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:52 min read
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Adam Lindsay Gordon

Adam Lindsay Gordon was an Australian poet, jockey and politician. more…

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