Analysis of Jim

Hilaire Belloc 1870 (La Celle-Saint-Cloud) – 1953



Who ran away from his Nurse and was eaten by a Lion

There was a Boy whose name was Jim;
His Friends were very good to him.
They gave him Tea, and Cakes, and Jam,
And slices of delicious Ham,
And Chocolate with pink inside
And little Tricycles to ride,
And read him Stories through and through,
And even took him to the Zoo--
But there it was the dreadful Fate
Befell him, which I now relate.

You know--or at least you ought to know,
For I have often told you so--
That Children never are allowed
To leave their Nurses in a Crowd;
Now this was Jim's especial Foible,
He ran away when he was able,
And on this inauspicious day
He slipped his hand and ran away!

He hadn't gone a yard when--Bang!
With open Jaws, a lion sprang,
And hungrily began to eat
The Boy: beginning at his feet.
Now, just imagine how it feels
When first your toes and then your heels,
And then by gradual degrees,
Your shins and ankles, calves and knees,
Are slowly eaten, bit by bit.
No wonder Jim detested it!
No wonder that he shouted ``Hi!''

The Honest Keeper heard his cry,
Though very fat he almost ran
To help the little gentleman.
``Ponto!'' he ordered as he came
(For Ponto was the Lion's name),
``Ponto!'' he cried, with angry Frown,
``Let go, Sir! Down, Sir! Put it down!''
The Lion made a sudden stop,
He let the Dainty Morsel drop,
And slunk reluctant to his Cage,
Snarling with Disappointed Rage.
But when he bent him over Jim,
The Honest Keeper's Eyes were dim.
The Lion having reached his Head,
The Miserable Boy was dead!

When Nurse informed his Parents, they
Were more Concerned than I can say:--
His Mother, as She dried her eyes,
Said, ``Well--it gives me no surprise,
He would not do as he was told!''
His Father, who was self-controlled,
Bade all the children round attend
To James's miserable end,
And always keep a-hold of Nurse
For fear of finding something worse.


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Poetic Form
Metre 110111101101010 11011111 11010111 11110101 01010101 0101101 010111 01110101 01011101 11110101 01111101 111111111 11110111 11010101 11110001 111101010 110111110 0110101 11110101 11010111 11010101 01000111 01010111 11010111 11110111 01110001 11010101 11010111 11010101 11011101 01010111 1101111 11010100 1110111 1110101 1111101 11111111 01010101 11010101 01010111 1010101 11111101 0101101 01010111 01000111 11011101 01011111 11011101 11111101 11111111 11011101 11010101 11010001 0110111 11110101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,813
Words 353
Sentences 20
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 10, 8, 11, 15, 10
Lines Amount 55
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 237
Words per stanza (avg) 58
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on April 30, 2023

1:46 min read
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Hilaire Belloc

Joseph Hilaire Pierre René Belloc was an Anglo-French writer and historian who became a naturalised British subject in 1902, but kept his French citizenship. more…

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