Analysis of A Utilitarian View Of The Monitor's Fight

Herman Melville 1819 – 1891



Plain be the phrase, yet apt the verse,
More ponderous than nimble;
For since grimed War here laid aside
His painted pomp, 'twould ill befit
Overmuch to ply
The rhyme's barbaric symbol.

Hail to victory without the gaud
Of glory; zeal that needs no fans
Of banners; plain mechanic power
Plied cogently in War now placed -
Where War belongs -
Among the trades and artisans.

Yet this was battle, and intense -
Beyond the strife of fleets heroic;
Deadlier, closer, calm 'mid storm;
No passion; all went on by crank.
Pivot, and screw,
And calculations of caloric.

Needless to dwell; the story's known.
The ringing of those plates on plates
Still ringeth round the world -
The clangor of the blacksmiths' fray.
The anvil-din
Resounds this message from the Fates:

War shall yet be, and to the end;
But war-paint shows the streaks of weather;
War yet shall be, but the warriors
Are now but operatives; War's made
Less grand than Peace,
And a singe runs through lace and feather.


Scheme XABXXA BXCXXX XDXXXD XEXXXE XCXXXC
Poetic Form Tetractys  (23%)
Metre 11011101 1100110 11111101 11011101 111 0101010 111000101 11011111 110101010 110111 1101 01010100 11110001 010111010 10010111 11011111 1001 00101010 10110101 01011111 11101 011011 0101 1110101 11110101 111101110 111110100 111100011 1111 001111010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 949
Words 173
Sentences 8
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6, 6, 6
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 152
Words per stanza (avg) 34
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on April 12, 2023

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