Analysis of The pain in your eyes.



The pain in your eyes.

Your eyes show a soft glow, yet your pain, I can see a shadow. Your heart whispers, but it's unheard. I can feel the gentle touch and your warm smile, yet I can hear your silent scream that hangs in the air under the moon's pale light. I fear to know your true fight. May our souls unite. Tears blend in with the rain, and your love embraces and heals your hidden pain. Together, we will break the chain.


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Poetic Form
Metre 01011 111011111111011110110111101010111111111011100110011111111111101111010101101001110101011101
Characters 428
Words 86
Sentences 8
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 1, 1
Lines Amount 2
Letters per line (avg) 164
Words per line (avg) 42
Letters per stanza (avg) 164
Words per stanza (avg) 42

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Written on May 08, 2024

Submitted by alanswansea18 on May 08, 2024

Modified by alanswansea18 on May 08, 2024

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