Analysis of Outsider



Where I sit
to eat
Where I go
to commiserate.

My colleagues are there.
Commaraderie is happening.
There is no chair for me.
For me, there is no welcome.

The club,
I am not a member.
All aspiration of respect
has quickly become an ember.

Should I cry?
No, but I do.
Will I be OK?
I should be, but I am not.

As I look around,
is there anywhere else?
Where else should I be?
There is nowhere else. I am an outsider.


Scheme XXXX XXAX XBXB XXXX XXAB
Poetic Form Tetractys  (50%)
Etheree  (35%)
Quatrain  (20%)
Metre 111 11 111 1010 11011 11100 111111 1111110 01 111010 1010101 11001110 111 1111 11111 1111111 11101 11101 11111 1111111010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 422
Words 104
Sentences 16
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 62
Words per stanza (avg) 17

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The lunch table at work

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Written on May 07, 2024

Submitted by bryonpoe on May 08, 2024

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Bryon Poe

My name is Bryon. I am the self-appointed Minister of Ecclesiastical Affairs for Bryontology (a wholly fictitious title for an entirely made-up organization). I am also known as Mr. Poe to my students. I teach seventh-grade English Language Arts in the Austin Texas area. more…

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