Analysis of Shimmering Alure

Hunter Aydelott 1960 (Tennessee)



Dancing eyes softly wait
Shining beauty radiating
Balancing in the moonbeams

Many a sailor's eyes have tried
To untie Stella's steadfast heart
Bound to oceans rocky shores

His eyes stirred her deepest feelings
Longing for his long tender kiss
Waves and tides ebb and flow

Holding her captain's promise close
In a golden heart on a silver rope chain
Daily wishes dream of his return

Upon twilight nights Milky Way
One star shines a hopeful winds wish
Guiding him home in a brisk steady sail

To finally embrace kisses remiss
Drawn to her simmering alure
Soon reunited together once more


Scheme XXX XXX XAX XXX XXX ABB
Poetic Form
Metre 101101 1010100 100001 10010111 1011011 1110101 11101010 10111101 101101 10010101 00101101011 101011101 0111101 11101011 1011001101 1100011001 1101001 101001011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 589
Words 105
Sentences 1
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 80
Words per stanza (avg) 17

About this poem

I wrote about a bust shot oil painting of a female sitting.

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Submitted by Huntero on May 07, 2024

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Hunter Aydelott

Besides writing I like underwater photography, doing mosaics, and playing keyboard in my friend's band. more…

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