Analysis of Temporary.



I just wanna feel something.
I wanna know I’m not a loveless husk.

I want to feel something for someone.
I want someone to feel something for me.

I don’t even care if it’s just temporary.
I’d be happy if something lasts for awhile.

Even two months would be okay.
I just want a confirmation of my being.

A confirmation that I have real feelings.
Confirmation that I actually can fall in love.

Yet, I am not falling in love.
No one is falling in love with me.

No one likes me more than a friend.
I like no one more than a friend.

Just let me have feelings, God.
Just let me love someone, God.


Scheme AX XB BX XA XC CB DD EE
Poetic Form
Metre 1110110 1101110101 11111011 111111011 11101111100 11101101101 1011111 11100101110 0010111110 010111001101 11111001 111100111 11111101 11111101 1111101 111111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 605
Words 138
Sentences 16
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 57
Words per stanza (avg) 15

About this poem

I wrote this poem a couple months ago, back in February. It was a week or two since the year mark of me being single again. That heartbreak broke me, but I pieced myself back together. Even then, I still occasionally wonder when I will find someone again, if ever. I try to remind myself about those fish in the sea, but that’s a bad analogy: I’m not a good fisher.

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Written on February 01, 2024

Submitted by Nate0316 on May 02, 2024

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