Analysis of Sandy Peden



was that Sabbath.

Last one inside the Kirk.

Preacher Peden shook hands

Smiling with that slight hint of courage…

Brethren, this is it.

Thanks for showing

In spite of drizzle.

So what is drizzle

In face of our trusty Covenant

And pledge, to the bloods.

No King, no stench of

Political favour, Bishoping

From postures of convenience

And personal gain.

Will head up the church. Never.

Rather our presbyteries

Selecting each good shepherd

Guide, father in faith, bringer

Of peace, love and hope.

We have had battles, deaths, tortures

Cries of hatred filling the air.

Disturbing the sheep in the heather.

(and so went his message

For extra-long duration.)

Then to the large front door

Parishioners passing through

Solemn silence, heads lowered.

Alexander, the Man of God

Raps the Big Door.

Thrice. With force.

(Shocking some larks to light

And fly off.)

Locking it. Sobs manifold in our hearing.

To the hills

We all surmise.

In precious secrecy.


Scheme X A B C X D E E X X X A X X F B G F X X X F C X H X G X H X X X D X X X
Poetic Form
Metre 1110 110101 101011 101111110 10111 1110 01110 11110 0111010100 01101 11111 010011 1101010 01001 1110110 10101 0101110 110011 11101 11110110 11101001 010010010 011110 1101110 110111 0100101 1010110 0100111 1011 111 101111 011 10111001010 101 1101 010100
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 987
Words 219
Sentences 21
Stanzas 36
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 36
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 21
Words per stanza (avg) 4
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Written on May 02, 2024

Submitted by dougb.72572 on May 02, 2024

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