Analysis of Heavenly Bodies



Bodies entwine,
your hand touches mine.
Your hips sway,
as I move your way.
Slowly making love,
dancing in the stars above.


Scheme AABBCC
Poetic Form Sestain
Metre 1001 11101 111 11111 10101 1000101
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 123
Words 27
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 6
Lines Amount 6
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 96
Words per stanza (avg) 22

About this poem

Inspired by the daily horoscope - "A cleansing energy takes hold when Luna blows a kiss to Venus tonight" citing how our planets (heavenly bodies) twirl around our star like lovers on a dance floor.

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Written on April 27, 2024

Submitted by Teket999 on April 27, 2024

Modified by Teket999 on April 27, 2024

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Brian Cooper

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