Analysis of Heaven or Hell?
Scott Patterson 1981 (Applevalley)
I believe that god above,
Made you for me to love.
He picked u out of all the rest,
Because he knew i'd love u best.
I had a heart that once was true,
But now its gone from me to you.
Take care of it as i have done,
For you have two and i have none.
If i died and went to heaven and your not there,
Ill write your name everywhere.
If your not there by judgement day,
Ill Know u went the other way.
Id give the angels back their wings,
Golden harp and everything.
An just to prove my love for u,
I'd go to hell just to be with u.
Scheme | AABBCCDDEEFFGHCC |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1011101 111111 11111101 01111111 11011111 11111111 11111111 11110111 111011100111 111110 11111101 11110101 11010111 101010 11111111 111111111 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 530 |
Words | 131 |
Sentences | 8 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 16 |
Lines Amount | 16 |
Letters per line (avg) | 25 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 395 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 116 |
About this poem
I wrote this poem for a women that I love more than anything in this world. From the first day my eyes saw her, I have loved her more than I loved myself. So much so that I wrote a poem explaining how far I would go just to be with her. Giving up heaven's bliss for an eternity in hell if fate would have it so, just to be with her.
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Written on April 02, 2002
Submitted by Set4life1999 on April 18, 2024
Modified by Set4life1999 on April 18, 2024
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