Analysis of Desperate For Restrictions



The power of this eclipse.
Recently witness by millions.
Not to miss its significance.
With changes of the climate.
And the shaking of the Earth,
Quaking to awaken...
Many deluded to fiction,
A consciousness.
Limited to fantasies.
Man-made to create alternate realities.
About who rules and controls over,
The minds of humanity.
Seeking desperately for restrictions.
To have believe and accept.
Well...
There is no greater power,
Than a Universe rearranging...
What has been done in the past.
Within a blink of an eye,
To find life blessed to have it...
As is to exist,
Become quick to feel a difference made.
After an eclipse to observe it witnessed...
Does what it does to remove,
Fools in positions...
Inflicted with self serving righteousness.
Replaced by the truth.
That power lies in the eyes of those,
Knowing...
There is a God.
Too massive to dismiss.
Or can be fooled or tricked by idiots.
Believing themselves,
Deities pick to represent Thee Almighty!
While sitting on a speck of dust.
Looking up thousands of miles away.
At something that takes their breath away.
And can.
Permanently if wanted to wish it done!
Naturally without debate.


Scheme ABCDEFFGHHIJBKLIMNOPQRSTBGUVMWXYZJS1 1 2 F3
Poetic Form Etheree  (33%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 0101101 10010110 11110100 1101010 0010101 101010 10010110 0100 1001100 1110110010 011100110 0110100 1010001010 1101001 1 1111010 1010010 1111001 0101111 1111111 11101 0111101001 10101101110 1111101 10010 0101110100 1101 110100111 10 1101 110101 1111111100 01001 10011011010 11010111 101101101 110111101 01 10001101111 10000101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,148
Words 231
Sentences 31
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 40
Lines Amount 40
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 902
Words per stanza (avg) 192
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Written on April 08, 2024

Submitted by lpahtillah on April 08, 2024

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