Analysis of The Dawn of Destruction

Randy West 1946 (Chicago)



The world is mired in turmoil,
  and it's made it hard to cope.
It seems that what may lie ahead
  is on a slippery slope.
The dominance of greed has
   become the face of fashion.
It hasn't left a remnant of what
  used to be compassion.
It has conquered every facet
  of our line of best defense.
Now lying in the ruins
  is the corpse of common sense.
Could there be a ray of hope
  that would have the skill to suture
every ugly gaping wound in
  our grandkids' precious future?


Scheme ABCBDEFEFGHGBIJI
Poetic Form
Metre 011101 0111111 11111101 1101001 0100111 0101110 110101011 111010 111010010 11011101 1100010 1011101 1110111 11101110 100101010 1011010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 482
Words 98
Sentences 7
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 364
Words per stanza (avg) 91

About this poem

This is pretty self-explanatory. The direction this world is heading into leaves little hope. I can well remember times when family values would dictate behavior, courtesy was prevalent every day, and respect was essential. That has ALL gone out the window!

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Written on November 09, 2023

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Randy West

I'm 76 years old and a combat veteran from Vietnam. I used to compose poetry while on ambush patrol as a way of staying awake on watch, since falling asleep could be hazardous to my health. I started early in life though, because, as a child, I would write little tidbits to my mom for the heck of it. more…

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