Analysis of Love lost.

Mumtaz Ahmed 2000 (Kotranka)



You are not mine now.
How I can mine, how?

Don't you talk, don't you see
You become strange to me.

Our destiny is  Separation.
Heart stops love's emission.

People laugh on ending.
Everywhere it's trending.

Your love is my health
My dreams, my wealth.

I can't take me out of it.
I'm dreaming, we will meet.

I will wait for you.
And prove love true.

My destiny, my dream.
You are best and cream.


Scheme AA BB CC DD EE XX FF GG
Poetic Form Couplet 
Metre 11111 11111 111111 101111 101001010 111010 101110 10110 11111 1111 1111111 110111 11111 0111 110011 11101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 415
Words 96
Sentences 15
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 37
Words per stanza (avg) 10

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This poem is about the losing of love.

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Submitted by mumtazchoudhar on March 29, 2024

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Mumtaz Ahmed

Mumtaz Ahmed, from rajouri (Kotranka) jammu and Kashmir. He is doing M. Sc in physics. more…

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