Analysis of Lose You Mama



Lose You Mama

I didn't just lose you mama
I lost myself too.
I lost our life
Our future.
I didn't just lose you mama
A part of me died that day too.
I lost my sense of safety
I lost my happy
I lost my faith.
I didn't just lose you mama
I lost my best friend
I lost my entire world.

In dedication of
Jennifer Ann Cook

Written by Christopher Ivan Griffiths. 3-27-2024


Scheme a AbxxAbccxAxx xx x
Poetic Form
Metre 1110 11011110 1111 11101 1010 11011110 01111111 1111110 11110 1111 11011110 11111 1110101 00101 10011 1011001010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 373
Words 88
Sentences 7
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 1, 12, 2, 1
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 70
Words per stanza (avg) 19

About this poem

I wrote this poem for my wife and her mom that passed away from covid Jan 27 2021

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Written on March 27, 2024

Submitted by djmaddog1982 on March 27, 2024

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