Analysis of When I’m Raised



I wonder deep and high
If I will bleed
And be completely dry.
When will Jesus come?

Will I not die?
Will I be raised
From the grave?
Before I can fly?

Or will Jesus
Come before I Die?
I think about these
Things and life it brings.

When the moon is
Bloodshot, I hope
I’m not crammed into
An Earthen pot.

At least my ashes
Can’t rot when I
Was burning and hot.
But when I’m raised

I hope to be praised.
Death shall be no more
After I suffer my lot.
What a life to trot!


Scheme AXAX ABXA XAXX XXXC XACB BXCC
Poetic Form
Metre 110101 1111 010101 11101 1111 1111 101 01111 1110 10111 11011 10111 1011 111 11101 1101 11110 1111 11001 1111 11111 11111 1011011 10111
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 478
Words 114
Sentences 12
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 59
Words per stanza (avg) 16
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Ronald Bunch

Ronald Bunch is a dedicated and passionate writer with a deep love for the art of poetry, science fiction, and fantasy. His commitment to his Catholic faith and his work is inspiring. His interests include writing, reading, social media, weight lifting, and riding an exercise bike. He enjoys reading a wide range of genres, including poetry, fantasy, science fiction, Catholic books, writer/author biographies, writing tips, self-help, and fiction. Ronald’s life and work are deeply influenced by his religion, his love for writing, and his dedication to his craft. His journey as a self-published author who writes six days a week, copywrites, drafts, edits, and advertises his own work is commendable. His personal life, including his volunteer work at Kids Food Basket, his devotion to God, and his love for pizza and cats, adds a unique touch to his identity as a writer. His upbringing in Catholic schools and his birthplace, Grand Rapids, Michigan, USA, in 1982, have also shaped who he is today. more…

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