Analysis of Variable note
In the depths of my soul, I am trapped in a well. I can feel that different winds are blowing now than in the past. I quickly waver according to my tendencies: when I am gripped by an inferiority complex, or just a persistent pang of panic.
My complex mind and soul are burdened by many painful and useless thoughts, and my time is purposefully rushing and betraying me. In the past, they were thrown into hell for many, many bitterly painful decades. My voice - if there was one - is now deliberately not heard, or has been silenced. Immeasurable and inexplicable is the sure feeling of spleen and stomach, where my wandering existence returns again and again to recharge, to find new tried-and-tested paths.
The future became a painted, leech-faced scumbag, pushed as prey - many times I also thought: I had already fallen out of all the remaining basket of abundance that once belonged to me. Why can't there be a true, loyal friend, family, or an immortal Beloved, who can I count on, and who comforts me with his omniscient gaze, lifts me up in the ruins of days?!
My soul - maybe - has already been lost for good. If I have doubts and many times my trust is already dwindling, I don't knock on fallen stone walls with my bleeding existence. I talk to my surroundings in a thousand calling voices: Alas! What could I do? What could I have messed up?!
My existence is increasingly wounded by eternal restlessness. I can barely bear the tumultuous and chaotic burdens of Life alone - many times I would rather let the light of the bright stars melt in the sky. According to the subhuman credo, I will remain silent for a little while longer; immersed, I look at the aimless roots of my severed future.
Fraudsters make hard-hitting, effective baits with haste: a much more promising job and career promise are now all on the rise.
Time-shifting fraudsters are starting to fold their stolen truths, which are worthwhile ways - more and more people are curious. I feel that my cogwheel life is idling on an increasingly large swing and I'm still not sure when Someone will come to lead me out!
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Metre | 0011111110011111100111011001110100101110011111100100101100101110 11010111011010010101111000100010100110101111010100100111111111010001111110010000100101101101011100010010100110111110101 0100101011111110111011101010111001010101011011111110110110011010011111101101110101111001011 11101010111111110101111010100111110111110010111101000101010011111111111 10101010010101010011101010000101011011011110101101110010101010101101101010110011110101111010 101110010111011100100110111101 11010110111101111111011011001111111100110100110111111111111 |
Characters | 2,102 |
Words | 390 |
Sentences | 20 |
Stanzas | 7 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1 |
Lines Amount | 7 |
Letters per line (avg) | 236 |
Words per line (avg) | 54 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 236 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 54 |
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