Analysis of Unexpected Rain in a Colorado Winter



Cold January rain
makes my heart throb, and
swell in my chest
taking up too much space.

Overflowing with memory on memory
and the sound
the smell

the shining black pavement
under the glare of the streetlights
flash back, years

walking home barefoot from prom
sobbing, alone
drying clothes in someone else's laundry room.

Summer, she kisses sweet, sugary
dim lights and desperate
prayer -

even before that
soft drops fall
echoing "gently, gently."


Scheme XXXA BXX XAX XXX BXX XXB
Poetic Form
Metre 11001 11110 1011 101111 10011001100 001 01 010110 1001101 111 101111 1001 1010110101 101101100 11010 1 10011 111 1001010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 453
Words 84
Sentences 4
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 60
Words per stanza (avg) 12
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Written on January 02, 2024

Submitted by eskarina_smith on February 15, 2024

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