Analysis of My deep connection with the ocean
My deep connection with the ocean, oh how it externalizes,
Like a mermaid, lured by its depths, this heart harmonizes,
For the sea calls me forth, its whispers echo in the breeze,
And I find solace amidst its waves, as my heart finds its ease.
I love sitting on the rugged rocks, observing beauty untamed,
With each crashing sound, a story unfolds, unashamed,
The sun illuminates the water, casting diamonds upon the surface,
And I, like a poet, drink it in, each moment an embrace.
As a writer, a dreamer, and lover of nature's delights,
I am in my element, where the world's secret language ignites,
For the elements sway within me, as ancient as the dawn,
Earth, air, water, fire, they dance, my very essence drawn.
And when the sea touches my skin, my aura it refreshes,
The energy field around me, each molecule caresses,
I feel divine vibrations, coursing through my veins,
Connected to the universe, flooding soul with no restraints.
My heart, oh, it feels intense, a love unconditional,
As endless as the tides, beyond the realms conventional,
The ocean breathes life into me, a love affair unabridged,
Its gentle, rhythmic pulse, within my own heart, firmly stitched.
The depths of the ocean, a mirror to my soul,
Its vastness, its mysteries, together we enchantingly stroll,
For I am but a reflection of the ocean's grand design,
And it, a reflection of mine, intertwined, divinely aligned.
So let me write of this devotion, this love everlasting,
Let my words be the tides, my pen forever casting,
A message to the world, that we are not separate, but one,
In the embrace of the ocean, this truth shall never come undone.
For the sea, the rocks, the beauty that unravels,
Are the threads that unite us, where our spirit marvels,
In this cosmic symphony, where souls harmoniously blend,
Let us find our solace, our unity, until eternity's end.
Oh, my deep connection with the ocean, forever shall it be,
A love affair eternal, resonating through each quivering sea,
And as I sit upon the rocks, my heart shall forever sing,
In gratitude for this magnificent bond, to the ocean, I will cling.
Poetry : Yvonne Padmos
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Metre | 1101010101111 101111111100 10111111010001 011100111111111 111010101010101 111010100101 01010010101001010 011010110110101 101001001011001 1101100101101001 101001011110101 11101011110101 010110111101010 01001011110010 110101010111 01010101011101 1111101010100 11010101010100 01011011010101 11010101111101 011010010111 1101100010111 111100101010101 0100101100101001 11111101011010 1111011101010 01010111111011 0001101011110101 101010101010 1011111101010 011010011010001 1111010101000111 1110101010010111 0101010100111001 011101011110101 01011010011010111 100011 |
Closest metre | Iambic heptameter |
Characters | 2,134 |
Words | 412 |
Sentences | 10 |
Stanzas | 10 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1 |
Lines Amount | 37 |
Letters per line (avg) | 45 |
Words per line (avg) | 10 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 166 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 37 |
About this poem
Made for the ocean embrace project. As seen on earthsynchronicities blog. Publish date 23 February 2024
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