Analysis of Present Unwrapped



Plan for tomorrow
live for today
the moment redeeming
 future caches

Say what you mean
do what you say
the circle enclosing
— truth on display

(Dreamsleep: February, 2024)

No worse enemy
than an ex-friend
No better friend
— than an enemy turned

(Dreamsleep: February, 2024)

Caring not much
for what I haven’t seen
Deaf to those voices
still trapped in between

Caring not much
for what I haven’t been
Each promise stays empty
— not kept from within

(Dreamsleep: February, 2024)

Can you …
Know
without thinking  
Win
without beating
See
without judging
Cry
without pain
Speak
without stricture
Come
without staying
Wish
without hoping
Share
without claim
Hear
without language
Curse
without malice
Hunt
without preying
Rule
without reign
Fly
without plumage
Dance
without music
Love
without taking
Die
— without shame

(Dreamsleep: February, 2024)


Scheme abcx dbcb E effx E Gdxd Gheh E xachcecijxxxcxcxkxlxxxcxjilxxxcik E
Poetic Form
Metre 1101 1101 010010 1010 1111 1111 010010 1101 1100 11100 1111 1101 111001 1100 1011 11111 11110 11001 1011 11111 110110 11101 1100 11 1 0110 1 0110 1 0110 1 011 1 0110 1 0110 1 0110 1 011 1 0110 1 0110 1 0110 1 011 1 0110 1 0110 1 0110 1 011 1100
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 946
Words 173
Sentences 1
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 1, 4, 1, 4, 4, 1, 33, 1
Lines Amount 57
Letters per line (avg) 12
Words per line (avg) 2
Letters per stanza (avg) 68
Words per stanza (avg) 14
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on February 26, 2024

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