Analysis of conflict

Robert loughran 1962 (Ireland)



I disregarded your kindness for it came in a practical stream.
Ignored your everyday wisdom as i lived in my perpetual dream.
Felt reduced by your successes, the comparing cost us both.
I shored up my defenses, poured acid in my moat.
I woke alone, among the lost baggage and stray suitcases.
while you having freed yourself moved on to better things, better places,


Scheme AABCDE
Poetic Form
Metre 1010110111001001 011101101110101001 101110100010111 1111010110011 11010101100110 11101011111011010
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 366
Words 69
Sentences 6
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 6
Lines Amount 6
Letters per line (avg) 49
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 293
Words per stanza (avg) 64

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about being honest with oneself

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Written on February 26, 2024

Submitted by robertl.92681 on February 26, 2024

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