Analysis of On the verge

Kelley Davies 1983 (Dallas)



What if it collapses?

What if I break?

I'm falling, dying slowly

Ego torn to pieces

Bright sunshine on the edge of a heart holocaust

There is bleak, and then there is darkness

Black holes swallowing the whole moon

The imminent collapse of a society torn from the inside

Breaking from the inside

I wander aimlessly

Contemplate my namelessness

I am a nothing, a nobody

But I am witnessing the end

Praying that final collapse just


Scheme A X B X X X X C C B A B X X
Poetic Form
Metre 111010 1111 1101010 101110 1110110110 111011110 11100011 01000110010011001 101001 110100 1011 1101001 11110001 10110011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 514
Words 111
Sentences 3
Stanzas 14
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 25
Words per stanza (avg) 5
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