Analysis of Conformational Illusions With TBI (Traumatic Brain Injury)



Conformational Illusions With TBI
(Traumatic Brain Injury)
by freebird02

How can one not see
What is in front of them
Day after day?
If twenty years were added unto me
Would there be
A new viewing angle over me?
This question is arising
From tears a-hiding
Due to actions cast unto me!
Let it be clear
Conduct from me
It is not adolescently done in front of thee.
For though tangled thoughts within my head
Create misuse of time within your day
The cause should not be an illusion every day.
Although there is no physical rationale for TBI
It's repetitional deficit actions
Should bring conformational vision unto your eyes.

December. 2, 2013


Scheme ABC BXCBABDDBXBBCCCAXX X
Poetic Form
Metre 010001011 0101100 11 11111 110111 1101 1101010101 111 011010101 1101010 11010 11101101 1111 0111 111110111 111010111 0101110111 0111110101001 11111000111 1110010 110100101011 010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 644
Words 121
Sentences 8
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 3, 18, 1
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 173
Words per stanza (avg) 38

About this poem

I was granted Traumatic Brain Injury from a highly intoxicated lady back on November 25, 1995. Therapon, communication has been more interesting than clearly an essence of conveying my thoughts.

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Written on December 02, 2013

Submitted by FreeBird02 on February 21, 2024

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