Analysis of Nectar



Honey blossom moons.
Pretty eyes of heaven.
Carvings all around your face.
Cherry lips and crystal tears,
kissing heaven on its mouth.
Touching eros’s body like a harp
creating, imagining daylight.
Sweet tongue, on orange roses.
Flying on the side walk of venus.
Statues on the floor, skin bright,
i am shades of black and white.
Give me love, affect me with venom.
Flower nectar, i am smelling,
loving you, i will, till the day my seeds will be shredding.


Scheme ABCDEFGHIGGJKK
Poetic Form
Metre 10101 101110 1010111 1010101 1010111 10110101 01001001 1111010 101011110 110111 1111101 111011110 10101110 10111101111110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 461
Words 92
Sentences 10
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 356
Words per stanza (avg) 80

About this poem

This poem is about the erotic rush and love you feel when you look at the person you believe is the love of your life. i wrote this poem when i was in a relationship.

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Written on December 07, 2023

Submitted by moe.sabra25 on February 21, 2024

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