Analysis of Falling Deeper In Heartache
In the name of humankind
let us kneel down before the Almighty divine
It's abominable to hush
On shingle and dust
On the robust edge
Of jeopardy
It's abominable to hush biding
From the dead
It's unspeakable to hush in the scorching Schism of rank and file
Originated by subsistence
It's abominable to hush after appearing through the mutilation of a toleration
It's abominable to hush when the squab of rectitude coated bloodshed
It's dreadful to hush
When hurt the first light and consternation about the showing moon
It's dreadful to hush when peace is war
And war is peace
It's awful to hush
In a world hell-bent
On dilapidation
It's awful to hush when there is no leisure for The living
You were told the war should last, but it keeps Going from day to day
And you omitted to smile
You are surrounded by losing heart
And you keep anxious for someone to be concerned
You leave that every door has Its unparalleled lock
You still trust in a lucky future, where you will Live in concert and peace
You’ll not deny those who have razed
You're grilling and crushing in danger
You wish it all to go away
Distributing in the dazzling sun and troubles blown from our day
By gregarious haze
So onward
You intend to be out of the way of all pieces
From the patch of this ruthless battle
You tend everyone to be elated and smile
You trust in delight
Sudan unprecedented life is an outset
But you will come back, breathe, construct, live together, weigh, straightness and support
You do not die
You brace from the cleverness, predominantly Tragic and grievous
Such as this nimbleness
Which you ask God for its evanescence and Sudan remains
And as it erupted, it will stop!
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Metre | 001110 111101001001 10100011 11001 10011 1100 1010001110 101 10100110010101101 01001010 10100011100101001010010 10100011101110101 11011 110110010010101 110111111 0111 11011 00111 11 110111111101010 1010111111101111 0101011 110101101 01110111101 1111001110101 111001010111101001 11011111 110010010 11111101 010000100101011101 101001 110 1011111011110 101111010 11101101001 11001 0101001111 11111101101011001 1111 11101000100010010 1111 11111101000101 01110111 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 1,673 |
Words | 308 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 43 |
Lines Amount | 43 |
Letters per line (avg) | 31 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 1,342 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 300 |
About this poem
POET’S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM: The poem was written on Wednesday, the 21st of February 2024. This poem captures we still face many difficulties because of the lack of security in the country due to the security forces being occupied with the battles. We have been facing mobs on our way, other than the burden of travel and the different checkpoints by both security forces. The fighting has turned urban areas into battlefields. The conflict has plunged Sudan into chaos, with combatants occupying homes, looting property, and committing other abuses. more »
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