Analysis of The hypocrite's decree



Out of my mind
head in the skies
I finally feel at home

Liver pills
and bottled thrills
no longer alone

Occupied sleep
growing receipts
keeping out the cold

I guess I'll see
the cuts and bleeds
when I grow old

Oh burdened me
hear my plea
I'm desperate and alone

I'd rather be
lost and free
To feel like I'm at home


Scheme XXA BBC XXD EXD EEC EEA
Poetic Form
Metre 1111 1001 1100111 101 0101 11001 101 1001 10101 1111 0101 1111 1101 111 110001 1101 101 111111
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 319
Words 68
Sentences 1
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 14
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 41
Words per stanza (avg) 11

About this poem

Someone is trapped in a cycle of substance abuse, accepting the consequences, and lying to themselves about their fate.

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Submitted by estienne_b on February 19, 2024

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