Analysis of The Maid of the Week



By Chris Commodore © 2024

What will life be remembered for?
Perhaps humdrum and chit-chat,
I doubt anything more.
On Sundays I get up and go to church,
And sit and doze upon the lurch.

On Monday, I must go to work.
On Tuesday, I must go to work.
On Wednesday, I must go to work.
On Thursday, I must go to work.
On Friday, I must go to work.
And sometimes on Saturdays,
Sundays as well,
To work I must go at the teasing bell.

On Saturdays must go to town,
Trek all around wearing a frown,
Buy some groceries, pay a bill,
Maid on the run, no time for a meal.
Pick up clean laundry, drop off the soiled;
Out in the hot sun, my blood boiled.
Pause in the shade; watch the sun fade.
More errands, bills paid, groceries made
Now to get home before it’s too late,
Not that there’s reason for leisure or date.

Just in fear of the rain that always brings pain
And the preacher’s a-chirping, it’s Sunday again;
It’s Sunday again; I must go to church,
To sit and doze upon the lurch
What will I be remembered for?
The curfew, the bell, at a quarter past four.
On Monday and Tuesday,
And Wednesday and Thursday,
On Friday and Saturday,
The round-about way.


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Poetic Form
Metre 1110 11110101 011011 11101 111110111 01010101 11011111 11011111 11011111 1111111 11011111 0011100 111 1111110101 11001111 11011001 11100101 110111101 111101101 10011111 10011011 110111001 111101111 1111011011 1011011111 00100101101 110111111 11010101 11110101 01001101011 110010 01001 1100100 01011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,160
Words 254
Sentences 16
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 5, 8, 10, 10
Lines Amount 34
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 174
Words per stanza (avg) 44

About this poem

Upon watching a house maid at work, I was moved to ponder my own round-about journey during a given week. There and then that meditation forced me to take a deeper look at life at large ...

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Submitted by ti.min on February 14, 2024

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