Analysis of Where One May Commune With God (Bussokusekika)

Edwin Tanguma 1966 (CA)



Where One Nay Commune With God   (Bussokusekika)

I’ve learned something new
A house is only a house
It is not a home
When it is cold and empty
I have learned that a home is
Where one may commune with God

Edwin Tanguma   Aka   Dagesh   02/09/2024


Scheme X XXXXXX X
Poetic Form
Metre 11110111 11101 0111001 11101 1111010 1111011 1111011 10010101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 249
Words 48
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 6, 1
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 62
Words per stanza (avg) 18

About this poem

I feel that it is self explanatory…Today I felt compelled to go search for some more meds for Blu…And I was about to give up hope and My Father spoke to me and said Son you have not gone through the whole list…And I responded yeah Father I believe you know more than I do..And wouldn’t you know…I found most of what I was searching for on the last car on my list…And when I finished applying the Blu’s poltices I went to pick up mine…And I asked My Father to bless me with some Brookies…And wouldn’t you know I found one small package of Brookies but I was informed my prescription could not be filled…Oh well…Maybe tomorrow…We’ll just have to wait and see… https://www. google.com/search?q=what+is+a+brownie+cookie+called&client=safari&sca_esv=c2f3d0b18548173b&channel=iphone_bm&ei=2ObFZfrhCqGlkPIP2ouz6Ao&oq=what+us+a+brownie+cookie%C2%A0&gs_lp=EhNtb2JpbGUtZ3dzLXdpei1zZXJwIhp3aGF0IHVzIGEgYnJvd25pZSBjb29raWXCoCoCCAAyBxAAGIAEGA0yBxAhGAoYoAEyBxAhGAoYoAEyBhAAGBYYHjIGEAAYFhgeMggQABgIGB4YDTILEAAYgAQYigUYhgMyBRAhGKsCSJOLAVCuDljngwFwAngBkAEBmAGRAqABsieqAQY5LjMwLjK4AQHIAQD4AQGoAhXCAgoQABhHGNYEGLADwgIFECkYgATCAgUQIRigAcICCBAAGIAEGLEDwgIFEAAYgATCAgcQABiABBgKwgIFEC4YgATCAhIQLhiABBiKBRhDGMcBGK8BGArCAgoQABiABBiKBRhDwgIOEC4YgAQYsQMYxwEY0QPCAg4QLhiABBiKBRixAxiDAcICERAuGIAEGLEDGIMBGMcBGNEDwgIHECkYgAQYDcICDRApGIAEGLEDGEYY-QHCAgYQKRgHGB7CAgIQKcICEBAuGAMYjwEY5QIY6gIYjAPCAhAQABgDGI8BGOUCGOoCGIwDwgIREC4YgAQYigUYkQIYsQMYgwHCAhEQABiABBiKBRiRAhixAxiDAcICCxAuGIAEGLEDGIMBwgILEAAYgAQYigUYkQLCAg4QABiABBiKBRixAxiDAcICCxAAGIAEGLEDGIMBwgIKEAAYgAQYyQMYCsICCxAAGIAEGIoFGJIDwgIOEAAYgAQYigUYkQIYsQPCAgoQABiABBgKGLEDwgIQEAAYgAQYigUYChixAxiDAcICBxAuGIAEGArCAggQABgWGB4YD8ICBxAhGKsCGAriAwQYACBBiAYBkAYI&sclient=mobile-gws-wiz-serp I learned some new meanings for Brookie as well almost like John Coffey…Except spelled different…✌️⛄️ 

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Written on February 09, 2024

Submitted by EdwinRayTanguma on February 09, 2024

Modified by EdwinRayTanguma on February 09, 2024

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