Analysis of My cat moeeza

Varisha Hasan 2005 (Vidisha Madhya Pradesh)



You leaving has made my world crack

I look for you under the beds When I forget that you've been taken away from me. You were the silliest I've ever met but you watered all my scorching regrets I miss dancing in my room with you for you danced with me when no one else wanted to But now I'm sitting on your favourite couch alone and I don't feel your little paws and you meowing to me at all.

Your wollen ball is waiting for you by the door so is the little mouse and your box that i bought for you from our neighbors shop; he doesn't need to save boxes for you anymore and the cat on the wall waits for you too for all you did was get scared from her like a fool.

You were there for me when I couldn't breathe no more but all you did was breathe next to me and that paused my worries in lesser bold It's hard for me to think that you are no longer with me anymore but I refuse to say goodbye to you my soul.

You felt so much pain yet now I feel more And if I could I'd turn back the clock I'd give my life for you before time could knot But silly me and silly talk for if I didn't exist the memories of us would rot.

You are a part of my heart and you shall forever be in gold so remember me like I remember you and don't let our memories dream in mold. I hope to see you again someday by the cliff but this time above the ground and not below it.

-I miss you with all my heart, and I know I always told you to go so you get relief from pain but munzz please if you can..please come back home...


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Poetic Form
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Characters 1,531
Words 334
Sentences 10
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 7
Letters per line (avg) 165
Words per line (avg) 45
Letters per stanza (avg) 165
Words per stanza (avg) 45

About this poem

the poem is kind of a letter to my cat moeeza who i lost on 11 december 2021

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Written on January 16, 2024

Submitted by varishahasan85 on January 27, 2024

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