Analysis of So far _yet so near



Upon your visage, a tender grace,
A girl with charm, a captivating face.
In your eyes, a warmth like the sea's embrace,
Deep blue, reflecting love and grace.

Your hair spun from gold, a radiant hue,
A smile that touches my soul, it's true.
Morning sun rays, warmth in its beam,
Kissing the earth, like love's sweet dream.

In a fraction of time, my life you spun,
A beautiful pattern, joy second to none.
Whispers of sweet words, like a melody,
Filling my heart with dreams, pure and free.

Silently I think of you, in dreams I speak,
Memories linger, a picture so unique.
With dreams to figure out, life feels on hold,
Hold onto my love, for my heart is bold.

The day we met, everything did change,
Listen to your heart, feelings rearrange.
Seemingly part of my everlasting dream,
A connection deep, like a flowing stream.

Will our hearts beat together, a harmonious song?
In love or friendship, where do we belong?
Is this the beginning or the finale?
Dreaming or real, the truth we'll unveil.


Scheme AAAA BBCC DDEE FFGG HHCC IIEX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (83%)
Metre 011100101 011101001 0110110101 11010101 1111101001 011101111 10111011 10011111 0010111111 01001011011 1011110100 101111101 10011110111 10010010101 1111011111 1101111111 01111011 101111001 1001110101 0010110101 11011010001001 0111011101 11001010010 101101101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 998
Words 206
Sentences 14
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 128
Words per stanza (avg) 30

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Its about a friend of mine, with whom I have secretly fallen in love...

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Written on January 24, 2024

Submitted by Manos on January 26, 2024

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Sonam Gyeltshen

I work as an Archaeologist in the heritage sites conservation field. more…

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