Analysis of Fake Love



Back then in the blues
I was profoundly in love with you
You answered all my unveiled questions
You denied me of loving any creation

Do you remember the first encounter?
You told me you love a writer
A writer who loves arts and poetry
And can take away all your mystery

I replied with the affirmative
That I will love a photographer
In order to maintain and keep memories
By capturing your smiles and melodies

I took away your loneliness
Brighten your life with holiness
I lifted all part of your pain
But all my efforts went in vain

You said you never loved a writer
You wanted a singer
Who sings in various tones as a painter
Who painted you with hue and different colors

You left me in a wave of pain
I trusted your love but it ended in vain
Even though I regretted but I was brave again
After leaving me with my pen to bleak
I still wrote again without a break

What I hate most is when I remember you saying you love me
And I actually believed you did..
Though the means didn't justify the end because it was a FAKE LOVE.
So I became a writer who writes her reality in fantasy


Scheme XXXX AABB XACC DDEE AAAX EEXXX BXXB
Poetic Form
Metre 11001 110100111 110110110 101111010010 1101001010 11111010 0101110100 0110111100 101100100 111100100 01010101100 1100110100 11011100 10111100 11011111 11110101 111101010 110010 11010011010 110111010010 11100111 11011111001 1011010111101 1010111111 111010101 1111111010110111 011000111 1011010010111011 1101010110100100
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,099
Words 233
Sentences 4
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 5, 4
Lines Amount 29
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 124
Words per stanza (avg) 30

About this poem

It's all about the pains a lady had when she got a heart break by someone she trusted and love, and at the end, silence becomes her only word.

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Written on January 12, 2024

Submitted by asiyaibrahim65 on January 11, 2024

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