Analysis of He Is My True Family (Bussokusekika)

Edwin Tanguma 1966 (CA)



He Is My True Family   (Bussokusekika)

I plucked my eye out
Because it offended me
I see clearly now
I’m no longer a blind man
I love only My Father
He is my true family

Edwin Tanguma   Aka   Dagesh   02/07/2024


Scheme X XAXXXA X
Poetic Form
Metre 11111001 11111 0110101 11101 1110011 1110110 1111100 10010101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 216
Words 43
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 6, 1
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 53
Words per stanza (avg) 16

About this poem

https://m.facebook.com/story.php?story_fbid=pfbid0pXYfxoLPLUF1hydgdpng7Cau2ypK6jAMvEDQuprVT6RomYTindDx6oNzcpRifuWql&id=100005345138528&mibextid=cr9u03 …This link is not for the faint of heart…It contains snippets of a personal conversation with one of my ex narci’s flying monkeys…Oh well…I wonder if anyone may find me coming across as the toxic one in it???Oh well…Single for life really is not all that bad…✌️⛄️

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Written on February 07, 2024

Submitted by EdwinRayTanguma on February 07, 2024

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