Analysis of What's in it for me

Lugesan Reddy 1985 (Toronto)



I like to rest on benches,
breathing sea's salty air.
A break from selfish wrenches
of those who do not care.

I saw this fisher sitting
so calmly by the bay.
He seemed to dodge the splitting
of hairs we do each day.

"I should be there, angling!
It's seclusion breeds vitality.
And escape the greedy mangling
of other's dog-eat-dog mentality."

A wave surprised him curling
with authority onto land.
Possessed with currents swirling,
it grabbed all with its hand.

This fisher cowered in vein,
as the ocean teased it's might.
And like being in stormy rain,
he'd drench from feel to sight.

He hurled into the sea!
This man confronting nature.
Adrenaline filled me,
when he brought back a lady's stature!

"I witnessed a miracle!
You just saved this woman's breath."
I spoke to him, hysterical.
This rogue who stole from death.

You slapped her face while yelling
for her mouth to make a sound.
Each word I heard you telling
the reason she was found:

"I like fish, like you like money.
We make it our life's purpose.
Like bees in search of honey,
it's coded beneath our surface.

So when the sea was crowning
your naive and careless head,
I had to stop your drowning
so I'd get my question fed:

Did you see within sea's guise,
where all the fish would be?
Because I only saved your eyes,
so I can get what's in it for me.


Scheme ABAB CDCD CECE CFCF GHGH EIEI JKJK CLCL EMEM CNCN OEOE
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 1111110 101101 0111010 111111 1111010 110101 1111010 111111 111110 101010100 001010100 1101110100 0101110 10100101 0111010 111111 110101 1010111 01100101 111111 110101 1101010 010011 111101010 1100100 1111101 11110100 111111 1101110 1011101 1111110 010111 11111110 11110110 1101110 110011010 1101110 110101 1111110 1111101 1110111 110111 01110111 111110111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,323
Words 285
Sentences 24
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 44
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 92
Words per stanza (avg) 22

About this poem

I always wonder if people do good deeds, hoping to get something back in return. It is a competitive world, and I don't judge anyone for thinking this way (I can be a victim myself). While this poem is exaggerated, my aim is to highlight the scarcity mindset and its toxicity.

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Written on January 30, 2024

Submitted by lugesan_r on February 01, 2024

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Lugesan Reddy

I'm new to writing poems. Tried my hand at short stories a few times, but it didn't feel quite right. It's been a great journey with poetry thus far! Looking forward to sharing and learning from fellow members, as we go on this adventure together. more…

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