Analysis of Angels , COVERED

Verlene Y Tyree 1963 (Chicago)



Security grabbed me
Spun me around
Put restrainers on my legs and wrist
Then laid me down

I started to plea
No human heard my cry
I had to use the bathroom
They’re ignoring me, why?

Something told me
That I could slip the restrainers off
Now move very slowly
Don’t open your mouth

I relieved myself
Got back on that bed
Didn’t feel any anger
Just gratitude instead

Looked up at the Lord
And simply nodded my head.
C O V E R E D !


Scheme AXXX ABXB AXAX XCXC XCA
Poetic Form
Metre 010011 1101 1111101 1111 11011 110111 111101 101011 1011 1111011 111010 11011 1011 11111 111010 11001 11101 0101011 1111111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 450
Words 103
Sentences 3
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 3
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 67
Words per stanza (avg) 17

About this poem

There was a mistake on my wording. Restrainers instead of retainers. Oops

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Written on December 16, 2023

Submitted by Vytlocks1 on January 27, 2024

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Verlene Y Tyree

Hi, I’m 59 years old and was born in Chicago Illinois. I started writing at 33 ;however, I used it as an expression of bottled up emotion. I use poetry as a form therapy. more…

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