Analysis of Taking His Chance

Henry Lawson 1867 (Grenfell) – 1922 (Sydney)




They stood by the door of the Inn on the Rise;
May Carney looked up in the bushranger's eyes:
`Oh! why did you come? -- it was mad of you, Jack;
You know that the troopers are out on your track.'
A laugh and a shake of his obstinate head --
`I wanted a dance, and I'll chance it,' he said.

Some twenty-odd bushmen had come to the `ball',
But Jack from his youth had been known to them all,
And bushmen are soft where a woman is fair,
So the love of May Carney protected him there;
And all the short evening -- it seems like romance --
She danced with a bushranger taking his chance.

`Twas midnight -- the dancers stood suddenly still,
For hoofs had been heard on the side of the hill!
Ben Duggan, the drover, along the hillside
Came riding as only a bushman can ride.
He sprang from his horse, to the shanty he sped --
`The troopers are down in the gully!' he said.

Quite close to the homestead the troopers were seen.
`Clear out and ride hard for the ranges, Jack Dean!
Be quick!' said May Carney -- her hand on her heart --
`We'll bluff them awhile, and 'twill give you a start.'
He lingered a moment -- to kiss her, of course --
Then ran to the trees where he'd hobbled his horse.

She ran to the gate, and the troopers were there --
The jingle of hobbles came faint on the air --
Then loudly she screamed:  it was only to drown
The treacherous clatter of slip-rails let down.
But troopers are sharp, and she saw at a glance
That someone was taking a desperate chance.

They chased, and they shouted, `Surrender, Jack Dean!'
They called him three times in the name of the Queen.
Then came from the darkness the clicking of locks;
The crack of the rifles was heard in the rocks!
A shriek and a shout, and a rush of pale men --
And there lay the bushranger, chancing it then.

The sergeant dismounted and knelt on the sod --
`Your bushranging's over -- make peace, Jack, with God!'
The bushranger laughed -- not a word he replied,
But turned to the girl who knelt down by his side.
He gazed in her eyes as she lifted his head:
`Just kiss me -- my girl -- and -- I'll -- chance it,' he said.


Scheme AABBCC DDEEFF DDGGCC HHIIJJ EEKKFF HHLLMM NNGGCC
Poetic Form
Metre 11101101101 110110011 11111111111 11101011111 01001111001 11001011111 11011011101 11111111111 01011101011 101111001011 01011011101 111011011 1101011001 11111101101 1100100101 11011001011 11111101011 01011001011 1110101001 11011101011 11111001101 11101011101 11001011011 11101111011 11101001001 01011011101 11011111011 01001011111 11011011101 111100101 110110111 11111001101 11101001011 01101011001 01001001111 01101111 010101101 111011111 011101101 11101111111 11001111011 11111011111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 2,102
Words 418
Sentences 24
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6, 6, 6, 6, 6
Lines Amount 42
Letters per line (avg) 37
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 224
Words per stanza (avg) 58
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

2:04 min read
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Henry Lawson

Henry Lawson 17 June 1867 - 2 September 1922 was an Australian writer and poet Along with his contemporary Banjo Paterson Lawson is among the best-known Australian poets and fiction writers of the colonial period more…

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